HI Adam, some nice ideas implemented here. • Can you go over your text again and put in more paragraphs as the text reads as a long story. • Title should read AS Evaluation for prelim task of football magazine. • From now till half term you are to create your Music Magazine please. • You must use original photos you have taken, show thumbnail ideas, target audience etc and show all of your planning. • I know you will do a cracking job as I know you are a perfectionist. • Pop everything up on your blog as you do it so I can give you feedback and advice too. • Good luck and try and get your shots completed in greenscreen room before half term break so you can manipulate them and save them as jpegs to place into your new mag. • Good luck. Mrs McD-H
HI Adam,
ReplyDeletesome nice ideas implemented here.
• Can you go over your text again and put in more paragraphs as the text reads as a long story.
• Title should read AS Evaluation for prelim task of football magazine.
• From now till half term you are to create your Music Magazine please.
• You must use original photos you have taken, show thumbnail ideas, target audience etc and show all of your planning.
• I know you will do a cracking job as I know you are a perfectionist.
• Pop everything up on your blog as you do it so I can give you feedback and advice too.
• Good luck and try and get your shots completed in greenscreen room before half term break so you can manipulate them and save them as jpegs to place into your new mag.
• Good luck.
Mrs McD-H