This is a very successful firstt draft, good use of first hand image, and good editing choices, you need to compare this to a real one now and see if this needs to be more busy and interesting, there is a lot of dead space.
This is a very successful firstt draft, good use of first hand image, and good editing choices, you need to compare this to a real one now and see if this needs to be more busy and interesting, there is a lot of dead space.
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